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Monday, 12 September 2011

Quality worker!

At writing time today, Max wrote an amazing story about his cousin, himself and his penguin Cooper Oxford. He used good sounding out, he wrote lots of word he already knew and he remembered his full stops!

Miss Pauley has typed it up and pinned it to our quality work wall, and she is going to post it here too!

Max's story:

This is me and my soft toy Cooper Oxford. 
He is so funny and he was cute! 
He was from the power shop.
My cousin Ben got one too. 
His name was polar bear. 
Ben's polar bear was funny like Cooper. 
Me and Cooper put on the power gun!

Max wrote 3 and a half pages!
Go Max!


1 comment:

  1. Wow Max, what a super story, you did have a lot of fun playing together. :)

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